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GROUP 1
                                                                 – JUNIOR MIDDLE 1

                Champion:

          LIM KOH ZHI SHEN
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             “If I had to choose one person
 By Kendrick Yap, Kua Sue Jane

                 to spend a whole day with,
 The  English Essay Writing Competition  2024  was conducted  across two
 months, with junior levels competing in June and senior levels in July. The competition
 aimed to nurture students' writing capabilities and encourage them to express their   it would be..."
 thoughts creatively and coherently in English. Throughout the competition, participants
 demonstrated  their command of language, critical thinking, and ability to craft
 compelling narratives  and arguments. After careful evaluation of the submissions,   If I had to choose one person to spend a whole day with, it would be my friend Yun Da. I
 three outstanding writers from each level were selected as winners, recognising their   enjoy spending time with him in my daily life in school, and I will certainly spend a whole day with
 exceptional writing skills and innovative approaches to their chosen topics. Their essays   him given the opportunity.
 showcased not only technical proficiency but also depth of insight, making them truly
 deserving of this achievement.  Yun Da possesses a tan complexion and freckles sparsely spread across his face. He has
            neat, straight, and jet black hair and a short stature. He chose to sit behind me on our orientation
            day, and it didn’t take much longer for me to take quite a liking to him, owing to the fact that I like
 List of Winners  his unique personality and impeccable sense of humour. After our places were first changed, he
            ended up right behind me, which was quite the stroke of luck.
    Category   Ranking   Name   Class
    Group 1   Champion   Lim Koh Zhi Shen   1 Zhong  Every recess without fail, Yun Da and I gather in either the canteen or the school cafe,
 1st Runner-Up   Yong Yoong Khang   1 Xiao  accompanied by his primary school friends. We eat together, all while cracking jokes, chatting
 2nd Runner-Up   Mook Ru En   1 Ai  about classes or homework, or even sharing bits of harmless gossip on certain arguments within
            our class if we’re in the mood for it. Yun Da and I never run out of things to surmise about, and
    Group 2   Champion   Thong Zi Foong   2 Ai  it’s likely we will. I find his unique input and insights into matters and affairs fascinating, and even
 1st Runner-Up   Cedric Tan Yu Xuan   2 Zhong  useful at times. I also trust him very much, and as such, I have entrusted some of my secrets to him,
 2nd Runner-Up   Gan Rong En   2 Ren
            and he has been kind enough to share his in exchange. We each keep the other secrets as they
    Group 3   Champion   Wee Zhi Ern   3 Li  should be: private and confidential.
 1st Runner-Up   Iman Yeong Yenru   3 Xiao
 2nd Runner-Up   Desiree Chee   3 Zhong  Of course our entire friendship is not solely based on small talk. Yun Da’s academic skills

    Group 4   Champion   Leo Oh Qin Yao   4 S Xiao  are not to be taken lightly, and I often find myself requesting for his aid in regards to a particularly
 1st Runner-Up   Lee Xi Yu Chloe   4 AC Ren  difficult question that I am unable to solve on my own. His strengths
                                           lie in mathematics and Chinese, both of which commonly stump me
 2nd Runner-Up   Chan Li Ting   4 AC Ren
                                           and force me to turn to Yun Da. He has rarely ever failed to assist
    Group 5   Champion   Kendrick Yap Ee Jun   5 S Zhong  my predicament, so I consider him to be quite reliable. Sometimes
 1st Runner-Up   Low Zee Lam   5 AC Zhong  he also comes to ask for my help, which I am happy to deliver,
 2nd Runner-Up   Yap Zian Jun   5 E Xiao   however such occasions seldom occur as he rarely needs help with
    Group 6   Champion   Wong Sheng Yao   6 S Zhong  any of his work, thus demonstrating his prowess and abilities.
 1st Runner-Up   Chong Zhi Qing   6 AC Zhong
 2nd Runner-Up   Lim Xiao Yi   6 S Zhong          Yun Da never fails to entertain me, nor does he even falter
                                           when I am in need of his assistance or insights. He is an immensely
                                           loyal person, and I believe that if I were to spend a whole day with
                                           him, my time would certainly be very well spent indeed.



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