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GROUP 6
                                                                                 – SENIOR MIDDLE 3
           Second Runner-Up:

              LIM XIAO YI

             Class: 6S Zhong




  Moreover, we can learn to be kind towards others. Being kind is to be willing to put
 ourselves in other people’s shoes and take in their perspective. If we are reluctant to learn   Should teenagers be
 about other people’s customs, conflicts might arise and hearts might be broken. Caring
 for other people’s emotions is vital in a multi-racial country. At some point, we might be   encouraged
 frustrated that things or people are not going our way but having different perspectives and
 accepting others can lead to mutual understanding and benevolence. People with different   to start planning their
 cultures have different love languages, for instance, the Chinese tend to use acts of service
 to show love and care for each other. Learning about other cultures’ love language can help   careers at an early age?
 us to show kindness and appreciation for others.
                      What is your opinion?
 Apart from that, we can boost our sense of patriotism. The way that a multi-racial
 country can move forward is through teamwork and mutual support. Learning about
 different cultures can provide a sense of community and belonging. When we feel a sense of
 belonging to this country, we are more willing to make sacrifices for it. During Independence   In today's rapidly  evolving  world, the question of whether teenagers should be
 Day, when our national flags are raised by people of different races, it proves that we are   encouraged to start planning their careers at an early age is a topic of significant debate.
 truly one and the same in our identity as Malaysians. During the Malays’ New Year, everyone   While some argue that introducing teenagers to start planning their careers can be beneficial,
 is warmly welcomed into Malay homes. It is truly a grand and heart-warming sight to see   others believe that this may impose unnecessary pressure and limit personal growth. In my
 people from different cultures enjoying each other’s company. Through this, we learn that   opinion, teenagers should consider planning their careers early as it can provide a sense
 patriotism is strengthened by holding firmly onto one another’s hands, that a chain is only   of security and preparedness
 as strong as its weakest link, and that respecting other cultures is a tribute to our country’s   for  the  future,  provide
 unique identity.                                                            opportunities for teenagers

                                                                             to explore various fields, and
  In conclusion, it is crucial for us to learn about different cultures. Our history textbooks   instil a sense of responsibility.
 have strongly emphasised the importance of learning and understanding other cultures. To
 this day, there is still room for improvement of embracing and celebrating our differences.
 I believe that we can do a wonderful job in that area. Let the sound of praises ring through   Firstly,  early career
 the paddy fields of Kedah; let the melody of peace sing through Mount Kinabalu and let the   planning  can  provide
 laughter of unity roars through the Twin Towers!                            teenagers with a sense of
                                                                             security and preparedness
                                                                             for the future. In today's
                                                                             competitive   job    market,
                                                                             having a clear career plan
                                                                             and relevant skills can give
                                                                             teenagers    a   competitive
                                                                             edge. Early exposure to
                                                                             career-related activities also
                                                                             helps them to understand the
                                                                             academic and professional
                                                                             requirements of their chosen
                                                                             fields. This allows them to






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